My Style Model: Coursework yr1

• Use direct address throughout, no names are used 
• elipsis are used often 
• 5 lines per paragraph 
• triadic structure about problems 
• 'the words werent coming so freely anymore' - Litotes
• Start sentence with because 
• repitition of 'first', 'first time', 'first love', 'who came first'
• personification of a feeling eg love
• asyndeton 'i came, i saw, i conquered'
• compares life to a puzzle ~ compare relationships to a game
• simile ' grey streak like a zebra' 
• last paragraph starts with ' i am 42 now' could start with something similar. 
• ends on a compound sentence